Q1 · UPSC Civil Services Mains 2016 · Essay · 125 marks · 1 min read

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If development is not engendered, it is endangered.

Topic: Philosophical and ethical quotes. Syllabus: Philosophical and ethical quotes Same official PYQ from year-wise 2016 and Philosophical and ethical quotes.

Essay map

Opening scene

Anecdote

A road is ‘development’. The woman still walks two kilometres for water beside it. The road did not fail as tar. It failed as a life. If development is not engendered, it is endangered — the line is a warning, not a gender workshop title.

Keep this in every paragraph

One stand

  • Engendered: who counts, who owns, who is safe after dark. Endangered: a growth that burns the household that reproduces labour. Write SDG 5 without a brochure.

Use once, in a scene — do not dump names

Quotes to earn

  • Ambedkar

    A life of dignity — development as her walk, not a photo.

  • Sen / Nussbaum

    Capability — one nod, then a tap.

Turn each heading into a full paragraph in the hall

Heading map

What the line is asking

  • Development: income, a tap, a school, a say.
  • Engendered: built with gender as a structure, not a beneficiary photo.
  • Endangered: unstable, unjust, eventually slower.

Numbers / title

  • A land record without her. A census that misses unpaid work.

Care / body

  • A PHC that is a day’s wage away. Anaemia as ‘endangerment’ of the next worker.

Work / polity

  • LFPR. A panchayat chair that is a proxy.

The counter

Men in a dying farm are also endangered. Gender is not a zero-sum of pity. And a ‘women-only’ scheme that leaves caste untouched is another sticker. Ambedkar: the last woman is a caste-class-gender knot.

Drop one peg where it fits — not a data dump

Value addition

  • SDG 5 / 6 Gender and water — peg once.
  • NFHS / time-use Body and unpaid hours.
  • PMAY / land A house and a title — engendered or not.

Last 8–10 lines in the exam

Last paragraph

  • Close: put her on the title and the tap. Expand — this is only the map.

Quick related

Students also ask

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  • Is this the full essay?

    No. It is a map. In the exam, each heading becomes a paragraph with one Indian case.

  • Tone?

    Material feminist. One road, one walk. Not a scheme catalogue.

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